One of the things I enjoy doing is revisiting past comics I have done and seeing them in a new light. I decided to re-do this story with what I learned over the years. I played with the narrative structure and here is how it looks now. If you wish to see how I did the webcomic before, just click on the “Archives” November 2011.

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